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  • Personal Evaluation
    • - Better space management with speech bubbles done digitally
    • - Better use of fonts to express voice tone
    • - Good direction and flow building up to chapter closing
  • Areas to Improve
    • - Seles/Edgar scenario could pick up some slack
    • - Page space could be used more economically for some minor scenes
    • - The maid character could have been drawn a bit more distinctly
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