- m a g i - Chapter 3 / Special Guests - Page Index - 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 Personal Evaluation - Better space management with speech bubbles done digitally - Better use of fonts to express voice tone - Good direction and flow building up to chapter closing Areas to Improve - Seles/Edgar scenario could pick up some slack - Page space could be used more economically for some minor scenes - The maid character could have been drawn a bit more distinctly
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