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Chapter 4 / A Night of Long Knives

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Personal Evaluation - Much improved use of speech bubbles and fonts - Focus on page layouting, scene direction and pacing - More use of overlays - Script boasts better language - Better character facial expressions - Better use of backgrounds Areas to Improve - Full pages still composed and drawn out by hand on paper; space could have been used more economically

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